Some people think that young people should follow social traditions. Others think that they should be free to have their own way of living and behaving. Discuss both statements and give your own opinion?
People of different societies have various sets of cultural norms. Some argue youngsters should chase traditional culture. However, I am more inclined toward the idea that youth should be allowed to follow their own instinct independently. This essay will highlight both the given statements.
It is argued that social traditions educate youngsters to have manners, morals, and values. Vietnamese’s customs and habits are exemplified perfectly for this. Traditionally, minded Vietnamese parents instill in their children a sense of respect for seniors. At a very young age, they had learned the value of bowing to the elderly, displaying their profound regards and appreciation. In addition, teens are raised to become well-adjusted adults and sympathize with fated people in society. These traditional practices stimulate Vietnamese’s global reputation for being professional behavior, which facilitates the chance of collaborations across the world.
Despite these benefits of following traditional societies given above, I am in favor of the opinion that freedom of choice fosters personal development. In the era of globalization, some old traditional societies are often outdated, obsolete, and are no longer appropriate to the modern community. Out-of-date customs limit physical and mental growth, which keeps them in poverty and narrows their opportunities. Teenage girls in mountainous areas, as an example, are forced to marry early to pay the family’s debts. These marriages are usually unhappy endings, which means they have a tendency to get divorced later on, having a huge impact on well-being.
In conclusion, while traditional standards are beneficial to youth’s behavior regarding virtues, teenagers should be free to shape their own lifestyles. In my opinion, traditional society should adjust to be suitable for the modern community, whereby creat prospects for juveniles being independent to explore whatever they want, therefore, contribute more value for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83959044369 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11284877368 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668941979522 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2465371536 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.647058824 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270336648826 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737523139989 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567265592735 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164836096642 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673225440874 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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