You need to attend a family event. Your child will be missing school for a day.
Write a letter to the school principal and say–
1- What is the event?
2- Why is it important for your child to be there?
3- How will your child make up
Respected Sir or Madam,
My name is Megha Sharma and I am a mother of Richa Sharma, studying in class 6-B of your school.I am writing this letter to tell you that Richa will not be able to attend a school for 3 days as we are traveling to Bhopal.The reason for our traveling is next week, there will be a 50th wedding anniversary of Richa's grand parents.
So it is necessary for us to attend this grand function.Richa was very closed to them since her childhood and so as they.That's why they have insisted that we should bring along richa with us.
Her cousins will also join from different cities so she is equally excited.She will be able to meet all of them after a long time.
I know how equally important the study is as exams are near.So I am anyways carrying her books while traveling.She will be in touch with her friends to cope up with studies.Once the function is over;she will study during remaining period.
I am sure you will understand and grant her 3 days leave.
Yours sincerely,
Megha Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...them since her childhood and so as they.Thats why they have insisted that we should b...
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...ferent cities so she is equally excited.She will be able to meet all of them after ...
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...mportant the study is as exams are near.So I am anyways carrying her books while t...
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...ways carrying her books while traveling.She will be in touch with her friends to co...
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...ith her friends to cope up with studies.Once the function is over;she will study dur...
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...t her 3 days leave. Yours sincerely, Megha Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51351351351 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56300590509 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.246693072 44.8134815571 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 76.5299724578 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 16.8248392259 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24903353079 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119850571465 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658944296394 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101849991633 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821692898028 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 8.62886597938 313% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 8.15463917526 331% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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