Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, it is believed that parents should hold responsibilities for crimes committed by their children. In my viewpoint, there are still some subtle exceptions yet various cases merit greater punishments for the caregivers.
Those arguing against this idea accentuate that parents are not always blameworthy. This point can be illustrated by various loving households that still display children with social problems. The case often happens with children suffering from mental health’s issue including dissociative disorders. These conditions, in which case parents should not be punished, might be generated from genetic malfunctioning, trauma that upbringers are not aware of or the effect from detrimental content on social networking platforms.
Yet, aside from these factors that the court must consider, parents still play a crucial role in molding young children's mindset. Therefore, the caregivers should be accountable for their children’s law offending actions. The argument is corroborated by the fact that most young children who decide to commit crime usually come from abusive households. Children can effortlessly imitate their upbringer’s acts and in this situation, they will consider extreme activities as a normal habit. For instance, animal torturing, peers insulting and bullying. On the other hand, households with nonchalant parents also lead to unexpected behaviors since they do not focus on their children’s manners or social life to detect their offspring's problems.
In summary, there are several cases where parents are not at fault for their children’s delinquent behavior but most of the time, they are the ones who trigger the child’s motive of being reckless. To build a safe and equal society, positive reform including mental health treatment or trying parents for their child’s crime is necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, for instance, in summary, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70357142857 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91949595524 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0716601059 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.071428571 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22791044237 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787665366032 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595540375128 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147187700146 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443101994073 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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