Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished.
Others think the parents should be punished instead.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary society, it is widely believed that delinquent juveniles ought to be charged, whilst several individuals claim that their parents are necessary to be responsible for their crimes. From my perspective, I concur with the former statement.
On the one side, it is transparent that parents should be responsible for their children’s crimes. That is because they indirectly affect their kids’ behaviour to be abnormal and dangerous through several cases of abuse. To explain, children might mimic their parents’ violent behaviour and then attempt to those with other individuals. Studies have shown that nearly all criminals under 18 have been abused in some way by their parents. Thus, sentencing parents would assist them in improving their educational methods to be more suitable and helpful for children to be good residents.
On the other side, I agree that juveniles have to be found guilty of committing crimes. The key rationale is that they could be integrated back into society with better behaviours through mental treatments. To elaborate, when they receive punishments, they will wonder why they have those convictions. From that activity, they could gradually realise that what they have affected society is unacceptable and actively alter their behaviours through therapy or psychological education. Therefore, they could be rehabilitated and returned to freedom as better citizens serving the country.
In conclusion, while it is deemed that parents should receive penalties because of their indirect effect on their children’s behaviours, I hold a firm belief that children should be the ones who take all of the responsibility for committing crimes due to possible integration into society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56226415094 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95642977899 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.573273789 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20721854595 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830773263708 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700976298785 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141649694926 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541382434411 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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