We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.
How do you think it will change in the future?
Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
As the world is now developing, human intelligence has equipped in manufacturing technology that based on computer. As a result of this tendency, people today tend to rely on this development. I assume that in the future, we will see an upward trend in this situation which presumably may bring us some drawbacks than benefits.
Technological life will become a norm in the future. We are no longer unfamiliar with the idea that humanoid robots are created to do household chores, go to the grocery or help us to tackle our problems. Base on this automotive engineering, a typical person life may be easier since they do not have to do much as in the past. Currently, technological companies such as SpaceX or Tesla have released multiple products that benefit researching, daily life and so on. Moreover, human creativity is unlimited but the ability is boundary. Machine with artificial intelligence is a key to make these dreams, ideas happen. Special robots will be born to do not only specific workload but also versatile jobs which need a great amount of workers.
Despite that this kind of technology in some perspectives may help to human kind, the negative impacts considered outweigh the advantages. Because we are depending too much on this computer-based, we soon may lose the ability to logical thinking. Take school for example, students tend to use the Internet or a calculator to solve their homework problems. The result is the young generation are now lacking of critical thinking. Furthermore, humanoid robots place an vital role on our daily basis that they do most of our jobs. This situation may lead to laziness, health problems such as obesity. People should be warned and take this development serious.
In conclusion, computer-based technology will be stronger in the next few years, however, some drawbacks of this trend may affect people life.
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- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer based technology How do you think it will change in the future Is it good for us to rely so much on computers 61
- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer based technology How do you think it will change in the future Is it good for us to rely so much on computers 61
- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer based technology How do you think it will change in the future Is it good for us to rely so much on computers 80
- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer based technology How do you think it will change in the future Is it good for us to rely so much on computers 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...red outweigh the advantages. Because we are depending too much on this computer-based, we soo...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ing. Furthermore, humanoid robots place an vital role on our daily basis that they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08064516129 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93298191853 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0452179177 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207731074456 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578923632432 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558649958927 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126865667312 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226770448874 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.