You recently travelled by plane but lost your suitcase. You filed a claim with the airline but have not heard back from them. Write a letter to the airline.
- Explain what happened
- Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it
- Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to my suitcase which was lost on Sunday, March 14 when I traveled on BA flight 5445 from London to Oslo. I would like to receive some information regarding the status of my bag.
I checked my bag in London yet when I went to collect it at baggage claim, the suitcase did not appear. A representative at the airport opened a case regarding the suitcase (#4565435) and said someone would be in touch with me within 48 hours. A week has now passed, however, I have not received any updates.
The bag is a 20-inch, charcoal gray, hard side Samsonite suitcase. It has four wheels and there is a black leather luggage tag bearing my contact information. Inside the bag, I have two pairs of shoes, several items of clothing including three men's dress shirts and two pairs of trousers.
I am extremely disappointed that I have not been contacted by any representatives of your airline and even more so by the failure to return my suitcase. I would like some information regarding the whereabouts of my bag as soon as possible as the personal items in the suitcase are of great importance to me. I was informed by the airline representative that I may be entitled to monetary compensation in the event my suitcase is not found. Please inform me regarding this matter.
I thank you in advance and look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dress shirts and two pairs of trousers. Would you kindly share some information ...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...on regarding the whereabouts of my bag? as I am extremely disappointed that I have...
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Line 9, column 415, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... Please inform me regarding this matter also. Thank you for your consideration. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73359073359 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87625870695 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2583271072 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1176470588 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166520135259 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564773617007 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426284986563 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103260142732 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473474196561 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.