People continue to re-commit crimes even after being penalized for their wrongdoings.
Why do you thinik this happen? How can crime be stopped?
There is no doubt that crime plagues every society in the world. The occurrence of repeat offenders is quite high, and there are reasons to explain this phenomenon as well as possible methods to solve them.
There exist several justifications for the recidivism of released criminals; one main cause is discrimination towards them. It is a fact that very few employers are enthusiastic about hiring felons, which leads to a vicious cycle of being unable to find a job and returning to the former life of crime when there are no opportunities to prove themselves. Furthermore, it is very difficult for offenders to re-integrate into society after a lengthy course of imprisonment, not to mention a lack of aftercare services or support programs. Criminals may also suffer from substance abuse, including dependence on alcohol or opium, which causes enormous adversity to overcome after gaining their freedom, thus dissuading them from making proper decisions.
In terms of solving this problem, crime can be reduced in a variety of ways, the most vital of which is through education. Students in school need to learn the importance of following laws and regulations from the young age in order to ensure future compliance with the law. Moreover, criminals must show they are capable of living a positive lifestyle in the rehabilitation process before being released into society. Assigning an arbitrary number of years of detention might not be efficient, rather, thorough psychological and psychiatric tests ought to be conducted to determine whether they may become repeat offenders on entering society.
In conclusion, people continue to commit crimes due to the prejudice towards criminals, a lack of supportive programs and unhealthy addictions. The resolution to this issue begins with schooling and insurance for re-entrance to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35051546392 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99463193203 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4491882868 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.75 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230449153823 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739274523217 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494533215827 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127880474061 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425643640177 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.