You live in a block of flats, your neighbor makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord.
In your letter, you should:
• explain the situation
• tell him/her how you are affected by this
• suggest what you want the landlord to do.
Dear Mr. Jones,
I am Paul, who recently rented your block number 306-B in Bruno wills residency. I am writing this letter to let you know about the issues me and my family are encountering because of one of the neighbor residing at 307-B.
Let me explain the situation thoroughly. Being tired because of moving, we were sleeping peacefully, when suddenly we woke up to insanely loud screaming followed by loud music. I came to know that Mr. Jay, resident of 307 is a drunkard man and he beats his wife which is not only a bad influence for my kids but also for society as whole. Moreover, because of chronic heart condition, doctors have advised complete rest to my mother, however, she can't as due to the screams, either she wakes up alarmed or unable to sleep at all. Owing to the fact that we are neighbors, I requested him multiple times to stop this behavior but he never entertains my request.
Would you kindly step in and solve this issue?, as I’ve notified the apartment association about this, but I’m waiting in vain for an action. Please pitch in and resolve it. Else, I have to move to another flat.
Thanks for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Paul.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...doctors have advised complete rest to my mother, however, she cant as due to the ...
^^
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...mplete rest to my mother, however, she cant as due to the screams, either she wakes...
^^^^
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...mplete rest to my mother, however, she cant as due to the screams, either she wakes...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6985645933 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53060748991 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703349282297 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3192840224 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8333333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193146502575 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678347027236 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600533593696 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127498262497 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551783488518 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.