Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the
sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently
committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your
reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The view presented above shows two sides . one side believe that political leader in order to be effective must yield to public opinion even if it requires to abandon their principles.On the other hand,the other side believes effective leaders are those who remain consistently committed to their
principles and objectives.However,for a leader to be effective he should neither fully comply with the public nor should he be too
stubburn in his ways and opinions
A political leader is chosen by the people and for the people.His responsibility is to look after and work for the benefit of the
whole community .However,there are times when his actions might be for the development of the whole society but a certain section of
people might not agree with it.Since,a society is a combination of people with different characters,ideas,opinions,there is always
a chance that what the political leader thinks might align with the thinking of each individual.For example,a certain district in Bihar
state of India had a very low percentage of girls attending school.Not the girl population was low,most of the parents didn't thought
it was necessary for their girl child to study since,eventually they were to be married.But,the MLA of that district thought otherwise,
and passed a rule of mandatory schooling of every child in the district till class 10.Had he complied with the opinion of the public,
most the girls would have missed on to their education.
There are times too,where the political leaders idealogies might be actually wrong and following them might work aginst the upliftment
of the people he is working for.Lets take an example. Suppose a political leader of some state dosen't believe in abortion and passes
a bill banning abortion.In doing so, he however is taking away the freedom of a women to make a choice.If a women is not ready or have
some medical issues or even might be a teenager,then having a child will be not be the most blessed experience,rather the worst.Also,the
the innocent child will have to suffer as well.
Hence,a leader shouldn't give in to the public opinion or be too obstinate.In order to be effective , a leader must asses every situation
by listening to the public as well as looking into his experiences,judgements etc. and then making any decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, then, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.175066313 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41706278006 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53050397878 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 23.0359550562 269% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 480.391044416 60.3974514979 795% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.166666667 118.986275619 273% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.8333333333 23.4991977007 267% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5 5.21951772744 335% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.97078651685 362% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 51.0 7.80617977528 653% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387078582602 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14248854542 0.0831039109588 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124497606326 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10280065542 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1077429919 0.0667264976115 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 14.1392134831 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 48.8420337079 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 12.1743820225 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 11.2143820225 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.