There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts — especially at a great cost in money and jobs — to save endangered animal or plant species.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The world is not just comprised of human beings.It belongs to all the living creatures.May it be animal or plants, all have the right to live.But,
due to the greed of humans, these voice less species are being killed.So, it is ultimately our responsibility to save them as well.According to the prompt statement, there is little jusitfication in saving the endangered animal or plant, espicially at the cost of money and jobs.However, I disagree with the statement due to two reasons.
The plants are the support system of the planent. They provide us food to eat and oxygen to breathe.Without them we will be as good as dead soon too.Therefore, their protection is very much crucial for our lives too.For instance, Costal regions of India are vey prone flooding during the monsoon season.In the Early years, the costal belt was densely covered with forest due to which the soil used to absorb much of the flood water decreasing the intensity of the damage it could have caused to the the nearby regions.However, with growing urbanization much of the forest was cut .Due to this, now
many areas are worsely affected when the monsoon hits.Thus, the example clearly indicates the need for protection of plants, which ultimately protects the human beings as well.
According to the prompt,a lot of money and jobs are wasted.However, ever since the creation of national parks and reserves whose main purpose is to protect the enadagared animals and plants, more jobs have been created and are contributing in generating revenue as well.For instance, Like many national park, the Gir national park ( aim in protecting tigers) in Gujart state of India allows tourist a chance to see tigers up close under a guidance of a forest officer.These experiences makes the tourist happy and the money with which they buy ticket for sight seeing helps generate reveune.The reserve also provides job like that of the forest officer.Hence, by protecting the endagered species we are also making profit.
The world is a multifaceted place.It not only belongs to us but to all.But due high level of intelligence,one form of speicies have taken domience.But with that level of intelligene comes great moral responsibilty to protect the other form of life and not take them for granted cause it the end we all interdependent.If they are dependent on us for survival then we are dependent on them too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01763224181 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98729297514 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569269521411 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 23.0359550562 343% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 249.805844607 60.3974514979 414% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 398.4 118.986275619 335% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.4 23.4991977007 338% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.2 5.21951772744 310% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 7.80617977528 423% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179696202634 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908033720487 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484322409761 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085496132025 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627184346423 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.9 14.1392134831 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.71 48.8420337079 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 12.1743820225 280% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.02 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.57 8.38706741573 138% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 33.6 11.2143820225 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 11.7820224719 289% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.