As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are different views about whether businesses should focus more on making a profit or social responsibilities. I completely agree with the idea that companies should do more for society than simply make money.
For a variety of reasons, it would be necessary to give more social obligations to businesses. Firstly, companies’ activities have considerable negative impacts on society, such as environmental pollution, exploited labor, v.v. Secondly, most companies concentrate more on earning money than being responsible for social issues. For example, today, many business owners are forcing workers to work longer hours for increasing output without caring about their well-being. Finally, social obligations are parts of the commitment to business ethics. Therefore, they should do something for society besides money.
In addition, from my knowledge, at no time have all economies in the world sought sustainable development. In economic theory, a sustainable development economy consists of growth both in quantity and quality. Making profit is about meeting the demanding quantity while solving social problems is about achieving quality development. For example, in the past, many American businesses focused more on exploiting natural resources. However, nowadays, American are putting more effort into natural regeneration, enhancing the ecosystem, and protecting the environment. Or another clear example is that today more and more businesses are doing sustainable business. While meeting customer needs and generating profit, companies also use environmentally friendly processes and pay more attention to working conditions.
In conclusion, I agree that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96899224806 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13936261371 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635658914729 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9674311853 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160934173533 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714259882744 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103602757865 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963767239551 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558675033435 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.05 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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