People say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty but some other people argue that industrial is leading to poverty and it should be stopped discuss both views and give your opinion.
Poverty, which is increase rapidly, is most heating issue the world faces today. I think some different type of industry built in the nowdays which can be become helpful for our society. In the contrast, other supporters against it, therefore I put my ideas and give my doxies in the following paragraph.
To intiate with, I believe an increasingly business can be clear the poverty ratio. If some factories and big companies comes into the rural area, so it can be creates a lot of job opportunities and even area can be developed. Poor people can be better earn without any qualifications like watchman, plumber, electrician, driver and so on. They can be easily obtaine job without any type of skills. For instance, Amul brand in the India is the best illustration of the situation, when they started their operations in Gujarat during 1999 approximately 4,000 people which were living below poverty line.
On the other hand, I think lot of people are not support this idea. The first reson is, if big factories is laid in rural area, so it can be a lot of harmful gases emissions and people can be suffer from different diseases. In the present days, pollution has also high like water pollution, noise pollution, air pollution, etc which is release industry and it is deteriorate the atmosphere. For example, recently, Government have announced about an environment day on 5th June, 25 percentage of air retrogress through chemical companies.
To sum up, my opinion on per with that industrial growth do decrease the poverty level as well as release harmful gases in the air which is not better for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74417549977 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614545454545 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3281069628 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196764271277 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671985371731 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409997100277 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118412619652 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188981538537 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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