men and women are not equally suited for many tasks due to their physical differences
In the twenth century , when we have freedom for 'right to speak ', 'right to information' and 'right to live'. This given rights are not enfranchized based on the gender nowdays . I totally disagree with the prompt that men and women are not equally suited for many tasks due to their physical differences for below three reasons.
First of all , according to the nature , men and women are born with different physical appearences but as today this differences don't make the less oppurtunity for both gender. It is old beliefs that women are physically weak as compared to men and are not meant for tasks in with physical power is needed , but it is proved by women that they are not less than men in power . For example , if we take a example of any sports either it is power lifting or wristling , womens are given their presence in every sector . In olympics for example ,their is equal number games opened for men as for women , so their is no less oppurtunity for women or men to show their power . Also , many womens are rolling their names all over the world for their capabilty and talent in physical power .If we take a example of 'Phogats sisters' from India , who won hatrick in wreslting in last three olympics are the perfect example to prove that women are as equal as men in physical power.
Secondly , from last few decades it was days when only men's are taken in defence of country because it is believed that women's are not suited as per the physical body and its nature . But now from last 70-80 years , their are women in navy , in army as well as in air force also , they are showing talent and their capability as equal of men to fight the enemies of countries, therefore as per inteliigence and physical nature for both gender are equally given and proved.
At last , the major difference in men's body and women's body is that men are not made for giving birth to new human into the earth ,but now science are given every possibilty to happen. For example , gay couples use adoption or IVR process for having their own child .Men are equally capable of having a their own child , they don't need a womenin their life for it.
Nature might be born the men and women different appearences and some different functionality for it , but opportunity are equally grabbed and given to both gender.May be their are challenges irrespective to men or women but tasks/work are totally fulfilled by both gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, as to, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57674418605 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38137772113 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444186046512 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7601883123 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.384615385 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0769230769 23.4991977007 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 5.21951772744 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 7.80617977528 512% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.60085947592 0.243740707755 247% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.243095701309 0.0831039109588 293% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166322742368 0.0758088955206 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349410664155 0.150359130593 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750691327161 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.