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There is a statement that paper newspapers is no longer necessary in this modern world. In my opinion, although I accept that online news has many benefits, I still believe that printed newspapers is still worth to be maintained and will explain my point of view in this essay.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that digital news is considerably advantageous. One of its merits is that readers can be posted by minutes because almost every electronic media now always tries to carry the latest breaking news, sometimes accompanied with videos or audio recordings. Moreover, approaching news through technological devices is obviously much more convenient compared to the traditional kind. People can update an enormous amount of information about various topics on solely one portable gadget. Thus, those who follow news such as political events, stock market movements or those who are simply keen on sport have all come to expect instant communication.
Despite the above argument, I also support the view that physicals media is equally important for some reasons. Firstly, printed newspapers is much cheaper than a smart technological device, which means that news is still available for under-privileged people who do not have access to gadgets or the Internet. Secondly, reading paper is scientifically healthier compared to reading from screen because our eyes are not affected by the blue light as well as radiation. Finally, reading newspapers is a daily habit of many people, especially elderly. Therefore, it would unfortunately cause inconvenience for them if we allow the demise of print publishing.
In summary, although it is notable that E-news offers many benefits thanks to its modernity and diversity of topic, traditional newspaper still holds the most vital position among news readers and will not be taken over by its counterpart.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, in summary, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25939849624 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93515624435 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65037593985 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7132751106 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0456196277506 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0168099152134 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381362305418 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0234846552121 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236230497897 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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