In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Traditionally, people are accustomed to going to their workplace. Due to the birth of technology devices, a greater number of people tend to work remotely. In this essay, I will consider both sides of this trend and give my own opinion.
Obviously, home working has several benefits. First of all, distance work can help workers feel more comfortable. As they work at their own home, they can be more flexible in their daily schedule, then provide a better balance between work and private life. Another advantage is that employers will be able to save commuting costs, such as bus tickets or petrol for their automobiles. That also has another wider impact, when lessening congestion in crowded cities. Moreover, telework also provides employers opportunities to work for many companies or organizations concurrently, which can help them earn more extra income.
Nevertheless, telecommuting is not completely beneficial; there still exist some considerable drawbacks. One of the most serious bad sides is the lack of discipline and motivation. No supervisor means that workers can do whatever they want whenever they like. The productivity and efficiency in work, as a result, may be affected dramatically. Another downside of teleworking is the shortage of adequate equipment. Some machines like printers or photocopiers will rarely appear in ordinary houses, so employers may have to pay extra costs for this preparation. Furthermore, remote working can easily lead to the loneliness and boredom of workers.
In conclusion, distance working has not only appealing points but also some negative impacts. Personally, I think working from home is still acceptable, only in case of well-preparation.
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- In the past most people used to travel to their place of work With increased use of computers the internet and smartphones more and more people are starting to work from home What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45283018868 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11757041348 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649056603774 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8134115152 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2777777778 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7222222222 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231883556786 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673757129568 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531471535732 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133517665679 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050571018577 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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