Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extend do you agree or disagree?
people think that it is compulsory for students to participate in voluntary programmes at school including charity's working, neighbourhood's improvement or sport education for the youngster. In my opinion, I totally agree that unpaid working participation is essential for student development in reality.
Firstly, voluntary service helps them enhance necessary skills, the understandings of living in meaningful life. Extracurricular activities with the homeless or the unhappy children are necessary to develop better interpersonal skills such as communication, teamwork through the connection with partners and others. Experience in practical situations of people in a charity creates a significant perspectives to understand the life's value which is remarkably important value they are impossible to find in textbooks.
In stark contrast, some people argue that these practices should be volunteer and supposed by students, not compulsory for them to join in a program that the do not pay any excitement. it is true by some extents, however, it fails to take into account that schooling education demands to bring their student about the practical values and academic knowledge. Therefore, they combined the unpaid outside working with theoretical learning system is extremely agreeable for student's development.
In conclusion, under no circumstances should people assume that the disadvantages of being volunteer in high school's education programmes, the advantages for reasons mentioned above.
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extend do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes To what extend do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93548387097 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28084061475 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663594470046 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0261337471 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.111111111 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298778184433 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11191975706 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802027563897 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171798345038 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790550720011 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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