In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that the government must have a legislation about the maximum of salaries which shouldn't do this action .Both views have pros and cons ,the essay below will show more specific .
On the one hand , when the government sets a limit on earnings , big companies will reduce a part of money for employers in high positions . This money can be used for other aims like investing or advertisements, marketing ,...which make companies sell more products .Additionally, limiting the income of the richest can solve the problem gap between the poor and the rich .The source of income not too different help the crime rate and dropout in children be lower.
On the other hand , the action to limit the salary of individuals who can earn a lot of money brings huge economic and social loss . If workers don't have enough money with their efforts ,they will lose the motivation to work , limited performers . Another way , they can go abroad and seek a good job in other countries . Consequently , the country might fall into the problem : brain training . Companies without good workers and employers can not develop , even if there is a shortage of high-quality human resources , companies can lose thousands of dollars . Unlimited the earning , the country will have a well -educated and skilled workforce .
To sum up , legislation about the maximum salary is impossible . To compare the pros of limit salary brings to not equal with pros of unlimit . a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, well, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93004115226 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69116458997 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609053497942 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0902306617 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.909090909 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165428179769 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066919569884 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321886541828 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969631321103 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227802651177 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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