Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on global scale while others believe that it is better to deal with them nationally.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It has often been argued that environmental issues has now become a problem that has to dealt with international collaborations, while others think some issues should be dealt on national level only. I believe that petty issues should be rectified on local level, however factors that disturbs the entire atmosphere should be treated by global leaders
On the one hand, It has been noticed that there are problems that might occur due water logging or poisonous gases that imbalances the nature. These issues should not ask for the interference on global level as every country has appointed the government body to deal it on state level. Also, it will help saving a lot of time and money that can be utilized in dealing big problems. For instance, Delhi suffered a lot because of bad air quality, but this issue was resolve by the Chief Minister of Delhi by creating the idea of running odd and even vehicles on road.
On the other hand, It has been observed that the problem raised because of hole in the ozone layer has to take seriously because the entire atmosphere on the globe is getting infected. Besides, it has now changed the seasons. For example, Global warming has occurred because of the release of gases like carbon dioxide that is now melting the ice glacier that is resulting in flood in many countries. Moreover, unwanted fire like the one happened in Amazon forest recently.
In my opinion, bodies like municipal cooperation should unite and resolve the problems of littering, dirt and greenhouse gases that is impacting city or state health conditions. At the same time the temperature rise problem in the world like the one effected the Vancouver, where temperature went to 49 degree Celsius in history has to be taken care by global leaders like United Nations.
To recapitulate, I would rather say, spending time to resolve the problems that few people can do it on time will save time and energy that can be utilized on big projects for developing countries. Furthermore, issues that is hampering globe can be interfered by body like United Nation globally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91525423729 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59182907672 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.472791223 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.846153846 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204438925262 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657157761984 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641217213101 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111538106235 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816620578309 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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