Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the world has become more and more modern and comfortable that people can decide how they can live and work. Some people would like to live unchangeably and doing their routine every day. While others find witnessing and exploring new things about the world is more interesting. In my view, I would recommend living a more adventurous life, but this essay will discuss both views and verify my own sentiment.
In the beginning, people who have a stable life usually have their safety boundaries. The safety boundary will keep them far away from the stress and worry of life. They will have time to chill and spend more time on themselves. In addition, the usage of spare time will be spent on developing their familiar relationship. For instance, after a tiring workday, you will have time to relieve stress and share your hobby with your family or your buddies.
In contrast, it seems as if people who have a changed lifestyle usually have more opportunities in their life. For example, when you open your heart and start an adventure to the outside world, the chance to establish a new relationship with other people is higher than ever. Nevertheless, building a bridge between people plays a very essential role in promoting your job. Moreover, living in an ever-changing world like nowadays, being adaptable to new things, and a new environment is a crucial survival skill to exist. As evidence, in the epidemic situation, unemployment is one of the social world wide problems, so people who can adapt to this situation will survive.
To conclude, I think each lifestyle has its own benefits and drawbacks, but I am of the opinion that the changing way of living is still more interesting and appropriate for the advanced life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in contrast, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9222972973 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70158549544 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577702702703 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3892639087 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229339611642 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724308707328 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472161345472 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135526223002 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481913601865 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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