Nowadays, young people have the tendency to stay at home rather than going out for
outdoor activities. Discuss the causes and solutions to this phenomenon.
In nowadays, the teenager are less and less hang out than before.
I see this tendency are more and more popular with young
people. I think this trend is very harmful and we need to find the
cause and solve this problem.
I believe the cause of this tendency is more and more common
because of the growing up of internet and electric devices.
Teenage are addicted with the social network, the time
consuming with the video games are more than the past. In the
other hand, in some big city, the space for actives are more and
more rare and the problem with environment are more serious.
The traffic jam, the growing up of building, the reduce strikingly of
tress are the cause of the air polluted so, the parents don’t agree
with their son to go out too much.
Right now, the government need to have some ideas to solve this
problem. The way to deal this tendency is that we need to have
more space for activities of teenage. In other way, the
government need to ban some private vehicle, use the public
transport more than past. Moreover, this way can help the air is
more fresh than before.
Overall, we have to reduce the number teenage like to stay at
home, we need to have more activities with sport, the hang out
activities. I hope that the government can solve this problem is
faster and better. The best for children because they are the
future of country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
In nowadays, the teenager are less and less hang ou...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ind the cause and solve this problem. I believe the cause of this tendency is m...
^
Line 11, column 46, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...raffic jam, the growing up of building, the reduce strikingly of tress are the cause of t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61752988048 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15290635968 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462151394422 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6106913263 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7857142857 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227647775125 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086540838075 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508746543259 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697406577936 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500863230251 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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