If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The speaker asserts that as long as the goal is worthwhile, stopping at nothing to achieve the goal is reasonable. Indeed, stopping at nothing to attain a purpose can help us fulfill some purposes. However, if any means taken to achieve the goal remain extreme, it causes a negative influence on society and individuals. In my point of view, I strongly disagree with the speaker. There are three different fields that can reflect the negative effect after doing a means unscrupulously, including economic, political, and entertainment areas
To begin with, in the realm of the economy, achieving a goal unscrupulously will cause an economic recession. Although companies want to earn more profit, which is a worthwhile goal for them, if they stop at nothing to get what they want, they will cause social conflicts and economic disorder. Unfair competition can be an example; Since unfair competition causes economic injury to a business through deceptive or wrong business practices, it will lead to economic disorder. In sum, even though the goal is worthwhile, achieve it unscrupulously will harm the economy.
On the other hand, reaching the goal unscrupulously will induce political disorder, even though the goal is worthwhile. To many politicians, being a president is their final goal; If they stop at nothing to be a president, they will cause social disorder. The African conflict is an example; For their interest, Africa's leaders launch many brutal wars in Africa without minding victims. In a word, in the political area, if leaders stop at nothing to achieve the goal, it will lead to social disorder.
Finally, any means taken to achieve a goal will result in unfair competition in the entertainment field, even if the goal is worthwhile. It is reasonable that the actors want to be well-known; However, if they stop at nothing to obtain the goal, it may cause improper things for them. Unspoken rules in Korea can be an illustrations. To be famous, many actresses stop at nothing to achieve their goal. In addition, to get an opportunity for plays, they must sleep with the director without a choice. As a result, many actresses commit suicide, because such an insult is unbearable. In brief, if people stop at nothing to achieve the goal, it is necessary for some improper things even impairing themselves.
To sum up, in the economic, political, and entertainment field, attaining a goal unscrupulously will make society and individuals injured. Therefore, I disagree with what the speaker says.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 317, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an illustration' or simply 'illustrations'?
Suggestion: an illustration; illustrations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in brief, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13349514563 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95174672019 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453883495146 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 13.0 3.10617977528 419% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.38483146067 342% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7416201765 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.619047619 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10549444605 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041728624531 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291762029258 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719160896047 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219795900537 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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