Some people believe it is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. Others believe that the public has a right to be fully informed.
The following issue states the views upon whether there should be transparency from political leaders to people or there shouldn't. The political leaders are the representatives of the people, since the citizens are the one due to whom they are currently in the ruling position. This holds them answerable to the public and necessitates the transparency, hence, I am in the favour of the argument that it is often necessary, even desirable, that the public has a right to be fully informed, but with minimal exceptions.
Since the citizens are the ones to elect the political leaders, any descision the leaders take must be accountable to the people and feasible to teh economy for their ruling area. We, the people pay several taxes be it GST, toll tax or any other additional tax which are then used for the development of our state/country. If the process of teh work of the leaders isn't transparent, people will never know whether their money has been utilized efficiently or they are just feeding the pockets of the ruling party. If leaders start to withold the information, people might feel insecure and this can raise several questions since crores of money goes to the government by the tax payments.
If the suspicion for their leaders regarding teh misuse of their money increases, it might endup with rallies and can endup with violence.Not only people want to be sure enough about the money that the government is using, but also they want to make sure that the current political leaders are working efficiently or not. For example: Since India is a democratic country, there are elections hold every 5 years. Hence, there is a critical need for the current leaders to build trust amongst the citizens, that they have the potential to do teh betterment. If the public is kept in the dark, the democratic election will loose it's meaning and essence. However, not all information should be transpatent to the public.
Certain confidential informations are recommended to remain opaque from the citizens. Transparency on such informations may prove fatal for the security of the state/country. This exceptions includes the information regarding the defence, millitary, plan to catch the most wanted criminal, mission to attack some place or any sting operation undertaken by them.
Hence, concluding the issue, transparency is important to maintain peace and trust amongst the citizens and the political leaders. This case has few exceptions, however, they are necessary for maintaining the guard of the state/ country uptight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12740384615 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84609598271 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516826923077 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2853684907 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.470588235 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4705882353 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295832339808 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090660603467 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568124952942 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153274878655 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652790099619 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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