Due to development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small local businesses are unable to complete. some people thought that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities.
Undoubtedly, it is difficult for local businesses to compete because of great expansion and growth of supermarkets. A fee of individuals concerned that shutdown of local business means death of small shoppers. I totally agree with the given perspective because of its demerits to local community.
To commence with, there are many reasons by local communities are endangered. Firstly, it assists small shoppers to leave their business. To be more precise, introduction of large firms in markets encourage people to buy their products and mostly people prefer to purchase things from supermarkets because they provide many offers on purchasing products as compared to small shoppers. Consequently, small sellers connot gain profits and they have to shut down their business. Therefore, they lost their income source.
Furthermore, local businessmen cannot get new jobs. To elaborate, usually small sellers are uneducated and do not know much about new technology based products, so that's why they face difficulty while seeking for new jobs. For instance, according to survey done in America in which 95% small shoppers lost their jobs and do not get employment in any other field after the introduction of supermarkets. Hence, local businessman feel sadness while seeking for new employment.
To conclude, I completely agree with the view point of people because it destroy small businesses and it also a major reason of unemployment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44196428571 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94230975643 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.2556810959 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7692307692 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247319102338 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941369333426 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722417531748 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151903328838 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700458445067 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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