Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In these days, people have discussion on either information should be shared with in certain area only or it should be shared freely for everyone. In this regard, some people think that the facts should be split only with in the scientific research, business and academic related people. However, some others believe that information should be divided for every one to develop the better world. As far as it is concerned to me, both views are equally significant. This essay highlights either information should be bound with in the certain world or it should be free for everyone.
To begin with, information is such things which help to find the new idea regarding business, education and research. Likewise, information plays the vital role to develop and assemble the new approach towards the different related topic. Deserving candidate knows the real value of fact and detail. For its instance, scientist is always looking for the information to find the new innovation. Equally, in the business world people are always looking for new concepts and strategy to expand their business throughout the world. Developing the new curriculum and prepare the new study materials always require the real details and fact for academic sector. Thus, information are those things which should be shared only with the deserving departments of people to avoid the misuse of real facts and details.
On the other hand, information should be freely delivered for everyone. Information plays the major role to create the awareness about the new technology, innovation and new concepts. Likely, with the help of information people will get to know about what is happening in the real world. To exemplify it, people have rights to know about the new rules and regulations, concepts and technology which helps to aware people about new law, technology and new products in the market. So, information should be freely transferred for every citizen in the globe to create the better world.
To conclude, statistics and facts play the major role to create the new idea and concept. Information should be freely transferred for everyone to get the latest news, innovation, rules and regulations. In my opinion information should be categorized by concerned departments to identify either data should be disclosed for everyone or it is only shared with in the related sector like science and research, business and academic world. It helps to reduce the misuse of real time information.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
..., business and academic related people. However some others believe that information sh...
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Line 1, column 475, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...ews are equally significant. This essay provide the some fact regarding either informat...
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Line 1, column 487, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...lly significant. This essay provide the some fact regarding either information shoul...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...rding business, education and research. Likewise information plays the vital role to dev...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erving candidate knows the real value of fact and detail and they are the one who...
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Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
... the new technology, medicine and other new innovation. Equally in the business world people a...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...ogy, medicine and other new innovation. Equally in the business world people are always...
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Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...s and strategy to expand their business through out the world. Developing the new curricul...
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Line 3, column 664, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...siness through out the world. Developing the new curriculum and prepare the new s...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...ly delivered for every one. Information play the major role to create the awareness ...
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Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'disclosed'?
Suggestion: disclosed
...ments to identify either data should be disclose for everyone or it is only shared with ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, look, regarding, so, thus, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09534883721 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64884537639 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416279069767 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8689291182 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4761904762 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270370811848 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982822694401 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705851491815 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188168634158 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787311585126 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
..., business and academic related people. However some others believe that information sh...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 475, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...ews are equally significant. This essay provide the some fact regarding either informat...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 487, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...lly significant. This essay provide the some fact regarding either information shoul...
^^^^
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...rding business, education and research. Likewise information plays the vital role to dev...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erving candidate knows the real value of fact and detail and they are the one who...
^^
Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
... the new technology, medicine and other new innovation. Equally in the business world people a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...ogy, medicine and other new innovation. Equally in the business world people are always...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...s and strategy to expand their business through out the world. Developing the new curricul...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 664, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...siness through out the world. Developing the new curriculum and prepare the new s...
^^
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...ly delivered for every one. Information play the major role to create the awareness ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'disclosed'?
Suggestion: disclosed
...ments to identify either data should be disclose for everyone or it is only shared with ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, look, regarding, so, thus, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09534883721 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64884537639 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416279069767 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8689291182 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4761904762 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270370811848 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982822694401 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705851491815 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188168634158 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787311585126 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.