Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Purchasing goods from well-known brands are becoming increasingly popular in today's era. Many people do that in order to look rich and leverage their social status. Despite the widespread of this trend, I think it is a disadvantage development that causes consumerism which is problematic.
To begin with, increasing social status as well as to enrich the outlook has become the primary factor for this particular trend. In fact, people who are wearing expensive clothes or using a luxurious car tend to get more attention from others and also acknowledge them. For example, a group of people that conduct a social experiment about this phenomena found that wearing a branded outfit and using luxurious stuff is becoming the most concerts before talk to new people in the streets. In short, getting self - privilege has become the main concern for people to buy expensive stuff.
However, many people said that this habit is horrible, including me, since it triggers people to compete in order to look better from the others and generate as much attention as possible. As a result, many people purchase goods that unnecessary and less valuable for themselves, and they regret it at the end of the day. My mother, for instance, has bought the new iPhone because most of her colleagues have it, but she cannot operate it properly and chagrined to buy it. To sum up, buying unnecessary products from a famous store is a bad habit.
To conclude, purchasing expensive goods from famous brands depends on personal preference and circumstances. Nevertheless, I think it is one of the worst habits in today's generation since it is problematic and worthless.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, nevertheless, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, in short, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05109489051 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77322737666 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4463264765 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26315904452 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861382287696 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320446468816 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145314581786 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395760342988 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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