after leaving school or university young people should choose a job or a career that they love rather than one that pays the best salary to what extent do you agree with this statement
Nowadays, many students who have graduated prefer following their dream by seeking a job that they love instead of taking a well-paid job. Where I agree with this opinion, but I also accept that students should find a job with a high salary is a good reason.
There are several reasons to explain why graduate students should find the career that they love. First of all, if they choose the jobs which they adore, this will help them passion always high and fun when they are working. Moreover, choosing the job that they admire may break their
limits by working hard with a hugely passionate to achieve their goals.
In addition, job satisfaction will help students gain experience effectively which improve their knowledge on career future path.
On the other hand, I also believe that choose a well-paid job for students who graduate is a good choice. Firstly, choosing a job with a high salary is a good option because it maintains their financial and living condition. Secondly, a person who chooses a well-paid job will be hard to promote but it will help you avoid the risk of unemployment because of the reputation of big business. Thirdly, getting a high salary job demands many skills and high tense, so students need to work more and more adapt to this environment, this helps them become experts in their field.
In conclusion, choosing job satisfaction give lots of advantage to students on better future, while picking up a job pay the best salary
is a good choice to work in long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...n their field. In conclusion, choosing job satisfaction give lots of advantage to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78927203065 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4950208045 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8032315802 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.636363636 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1818181818 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242551504415 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10779179343 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431719051717 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112812652914 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775307489822 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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