the layouts of two offices, one to accommodate a maximum of eight people and the other to fit a maximum of ten people.
The two diagrams illustrate the different layouts between two rooms, which one can be suitable for maximum 8 people, while the other accordant to the limit of 10 people.
Overall, the official infrastructures in both rooms are not different as much, except in room B contain more desk than its in room A. Furthermore, there are some disparities in the distribution of those facilities in two rooms.
Looking at the layouts too closely, one can see that the eight desks in room A are split evenly into four of each at the two sides of the room. Meanwhile, room B has two more desks and those pushed together and located on the left side of the room, opposite to the entrance. The table in the left layout is put at the center of the room, whilst it is located head to the right side in the second diagram. Furthermore, bookshelves and a coffee machine also have different positions when comparing two rooms. There are bookshelves ahead of the entrance way in room A and the coffee is lied at the oppose side looked from those shelves, whilst the coffee machine is located ahead the entrance and bookshelves are put on the left-hand side next to the entrance way into room B.
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| 2021-08-11 | Tôn Nguyễn Hồng Phúc | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ne can see that the eight desks in room A are split evenly into four of each at the t...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...ntrance way in room A and the coffee is lied at the oppose side looked from those sh...
^^^^
Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...way in room A and the coffee is lied at the oppose side looked from those shelves, whilst ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 773, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...de next to the entrance way into room B.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58293838863 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57781569494 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521327014218 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6013833803 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.875 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114988460013 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584979958993 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654075555618 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983148984363 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798333866178 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.