One of the aims of the Olympic Games is to improve relationships among countries. Do you think they have achieved this? In no more than 250 words, write an opinion essay to answer this question.
The goal of organizing the Olympic Games is not only for athletes between countries to exchange cultures and show their talents, but in which the Olympic also have the goal of improving relations between countries. Despite the fact of uniting people worldwide, I believe that such events may cause political issues among the realization of the goal of improving relations between countries has not yet been achieved.
On the one hand, it is not a secret that all types of widespread champions are often used as an instrument of political manipulations. The aim of such agenda is probably to indicated the aggressive foreign policy of a particular country. For example, Russia whose athletes had been prohibited to take part in the Olympic Games 2017 on account of several political factor.
On the other hand, countries competing in the Olympics often have deep international ties, and competition can intuitively reduce tensions. Advocates may turn against other nations in the games, specific circumstances, such as when watching a football match, but they are united because of their love of sports and the shared viewing experience. This is a subtle but powerful unconscious result of fostering greater empathy among diverse national and ethnic group.
To sum up, the Olympics are a collaborative effort, the masses are of great value. So it is possible to improve relations between countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23555555556 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87518115371 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608888888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6621160237 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168427138665 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574304665027 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281592378359 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869951394531 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240782502044 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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