The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So governments and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary times, environmental problems or climate change is the most contentious issue due to the fact that every person in the world is concerned for their future existence. It is not possible for a single person to solve this problem, therefore every person of the world and both the governments and organizations should come forward to control this problem.
On the one hand, to handle this issue people or the authorities can use different ways. First of all, every responsible person can attend the campaigns that are organized to clean the environment and collect the wastages for recycling. Secondly, the government can arrange a training program to train people so that they can reuse their daily waste in different ways. For example, without throwing the plastic bottle outside home, they use this bottle as a nice ornament or from the wastage food they can make organic fertilizer which is helpful for cultivation. Moreover, the government can use different media especially, the social media such as Facebook which is used by most people to encourage them to use reusable material.
Moreover, the government can increase the green taxes or strict the rules and regulations so that the big companies become careful and make sure that they purify chemicals before they are released into the environment. For instance, most of the factories release chemical smoke in the air. In that case the government should make a law that the companies should use special chimneys which work as a filter to filterize the chemical particles. Furthermore, the government encourages the people and the companies to use renewable energy so that the use of fossil fuel decreases. For example, the Vietnam government took steps to motivate people to use solar and made many windmills to meet the energy demand of people instead of using coal and oil.
In conclusion, to sum up all the points above, the government can not succeed alone to solve this problem, so we the people should work with the authorities so that we can resolve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05899705015 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70904407119 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504424778761 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1590938423 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.923076923 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24372076452 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939685912446 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425617506859 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161230612074 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215412022655 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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