Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the question you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these consideration shape your position.
Leader has authority to take decision, and which meant it followed by his sub team member. According to given topic leader who quickly and easily influenced by shift in popular opinion will accomplish little that who may not. I partially agree with topic, popular opinion based on emotional think, not on the basis of actual or practical overview.
Firstly,If suppose an leader to be considered in company holder person, who start his new business.he has good skill, knowledge but due to lack of experience he may felt in taking decision. Instead if take help of his co-worker who are so emotional, may guide him in wrongly manner. It may result an doubtful implication to wards his ability or he may not succeed in his business.
consider a situation, If any emergency happen at the time of landing of aeroplane. Ability of leader matter lot at that time, If he firms on his decision or know the alternate then it's save life of number of people, Instead he influenced due to the situation, people action. so he may influenced in taking decision which may cause accident.
Now consider, if an surrounding people have previous year's of experience, known about prons and cons of situation, then leader may take consideration of people.even though it sound acceptable, without influencing let us first understand thoroughly, identifies differences then take certain decision.
To sum up with all, Leader may always consider prons and cons of every situation and not influenced by easily and quickly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , If
...actual or practical overview. Firstly,If suppose an leader to be considered in c...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...actical overview. Firstly,If suppose an leader to be considered in company hold...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...erience he may felt in taking decision. Instead if take help of his co-worker who are s...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...de him in wrongly manner. It may result an doubtful implication to wards his abili...
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Suggestion: Consider
... he may not succeed in his business. consider a situation, If any emergency happen at...
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Suggestion: So
...ed due to the situation, people action. so he may influenced in taking decision wh...
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Suggestion: a
...may cause accident. Now consider, if an surrounding people have previous years ...
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Message: Did you mean 'sounds'?
Suggestion: sounds
... consideration of people.even though it sound acceptable, without influencing let us ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 249.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06024096386 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80919029905 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9056530793 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.545454545 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185375624597 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832161195126 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770044979545 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113825670245 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949402184184 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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