Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Nowadays, the world is getting much more modern. Everything is gradually turning into online platforms. Such things like books, air tickets, groceries and the like can be purchased on the Internet. This way of acquisition is getting more and more well-known in societies. However, a herb of people still wonder whether this way is convenient or not? Each individual will have their own answer. From my own knowledge, I believe that the advantages of online shopping can not outweigh the disadvantages. First of all, a lot of people do believe that when you want to buy something you have to see in person. Imagine you see a beautiful dress wore by a splendid model through the image on Shopee ( an online shopping app), you really like this dress, but it is impossible to try it. So the problem is you can not know whether these eye-catching online things look the same in fact. A lot of scenery of this problem can easily be seen on the Internet. Secondly, not everyone have and know well about this way of buying. Our older generations is gradually approaching the modern world, but they do not really master about it. So it would be a huge unbenefited shopping method for them. Finally, we have to take seriously the risks of online deceiving into account. Those people can easily create a fake id or account to cheat innocent low-tech buyer. This case did really happen in my real life and a lot of people around me especially the older. Three months ago I made a purchase of an air ticket, the seller told me to transmit the money first and the code of the ticket will be sent through my email. After transmitting, I waited for all day long and nothing happened. Then I realized that was a fraud. In conclusion, each of the way has its own advantages and disadvantages, so everyone should be a smart buyer. Be alert!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 693, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lendid model through the image on Shopee an online shopping app, you really like ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59692307692 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62777877718 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556923076923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2230235902 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1428571429 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19555911447 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052614395121 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486540096706 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19555911447 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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