Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children are happier than adults.
In today's times, we have seen most of the adults hoping that they could go back to their childhood again. They believe that they were more happy as children. But is it really true that a kid is much happier than a fully grown human being? In my opinion, I agree with the fact that a child is happier than an adult because they have less complex lives and tend to forget pain easily
The lives of children aren't really convoluted. They have a very simple schedule managed by their parents and don't have to worry about any responsibilities. For a toddler, his primary schedule is to eat, play and sleep; all of which is handled by his parents. They are the ones who have to worry about what kind of food should be given to him, where is it safe for a little one to play and when to put him to sleep for him to be healthy. His job is just to actually do those things. Moreover, the baby doesn't have to worry about the dependency of an entire household on him. He never has to tense up about paying bills and EMIs, getting groceries, cleaning the house, cooking and feeding family members, etc. All of this leads to lesser amount of distress and more happiness.
Another reason which proves that a child is much happier is their inherent conditioning to forget the suffering easily. If a child suffers from a physical injury, he might cry for a while but he forgets it so easily the next day. For example, if a baby falls down from the swing, she might cry for a few minutes, but she will again go back to her friends easily and play on that swing again. Similarly, they don't remember the emotional affliction either. If a kid's parents scold him, he will forget it in a couple of hours and won't hold a grudge against them. But adults often remember their physical and mental discomfort for a large amount of time which could become a reason of constant negativity in them.
Children complicate things lesser than adults and discard their issues easily which makes them joyful. That's why everyone loves their memories from the times they were young. It is always suggested that we should learn to lead simpler lives from children so as to make our days better.
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...arn to lead simpler lives from children so as to make our days better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, really, similarly, so, while, as to, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46717171717 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26157053969 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542929292929 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2385015004 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.45 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121798748546 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371264531467 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056669110147 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871915169794 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714889902792 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.