In many country around the world, life expectancy is increasing.
Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.
Medical care has witnessed numerous breakthroughs in the past decades. As a result, lives are expected to be further lengthened on a worldwide scale. This essay will cover the financial burden and benefits in terms of knowledge and experience of living longer, then elucidate why this advancement should be alerted.
From a capitalist perspective, the increase in longevity might lead to tremendously detrimental impacts on finance of the close ones and the authority as a whole. Given that old age is associated with incapability to labor, owning to health issues such as Alzheimer's disease and blurry vision,...aged people are unable to provide for their families, or even make a living for themselves. Consequently, younger generations have to shoulder the expanding expenditure on their families and more tariff, which is for more welfare allocated to the the population getting older. Japan exemplifies this with the portion of over-60-year-old citizens, who cost the government millions of Yens per annum, showing no sign to drop.
On the bright side, benefits can be derived from the copious wisdom and diversified experience of years living and working. With regard to the operation of any business, if a callow employee is in charge, efficiency will not likely to be optimal. It is by virtue of the reality that some specifically indispensable credentials, endurance and meticulousness for instance, can only be accumulated after ages of practicing. Senior positions in Vietnamese industrial co-operations are prime examples since any regional manager or high-rank staff is in the fifties minimally.
Weighing both sides, it is undeniable that longer lives are more-negative-than positive outcomes of medical amelioration. Albeit it brings more prosperity to a group of entrepreneurs and elite experts, life extension deteriorates financial stability of a whole nation. The imbalance between the number of people suffering from the drawbacks and how many individuals benefited form it bolsters that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
To conclude, whilst more lengthened lives have deleterious effects on family, national expense, the exploitation of experience is a rare one on the plus side. Despite having some pros, it is impossible to ignore its negativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, then, for instance, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77936962751 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28977264924 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638968481375 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4615786 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0625 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0646792160584 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0182376525154 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229054343792 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0327762373165 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278043010154 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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