Ask your boss for a week time off for your honeymoon.
Dear Sir or Madam,
First of all, Thank you for attending my wedding from your busy schedule and coming all the way to Calcutta with your family. I am really grateful for that. At present, occupied with remaining things after the ceremony. For example, clearing pending dues, meeting relatives, packing bags etc.
Oh, just to mention that we have decided to visit Europe as a part of our honeymoon, next week on 20th November, 2021. I am writing this for seeking the permission regarding the same.
We have planned in total 10 days period, but I need only a week off as after coming back, a day or two will go in settling down.
Also, I am fully aware about our meeting with very important delegates on 1st October. I have already covered majority of the points for the upcoming meeting.Also, in my absence, I have assigned all my responsibilities to Alok,who is perfect in fulfilling his duties and work.
Be assured that work will not get suffered when I am not around.
I am sure you will grant my leave.
Yours faithfully,
Sameer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, First of all, Thank you for attending my...
^^^
Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es, meeting relatives, packing bags etc. Oh, just to mention that we have decided...
^^^^
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'November 2021'.
Suggestion: November 2021
...art of our honeymoon, next week on 20th November, 2021. I am writing this for seeking the perm...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
... of the points for the upcoming meeting.Also, in my absence, I have assigned all my ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , who
...assigned all my responsibilities to Alok,who is perfect in fulfilling his duties and...
^^^^
Line 8, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will grant my leave. Yours faithfully, Sameer
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, really, regarding, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66847826087 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60097930336 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701086956522 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4449143071 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5833333333 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2269630547 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759288424003 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678863587887 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777499758361 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812661828833 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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