People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Any risky actions that are undertaken by an individual can lead to either negative or positive consequences. Moreover, it requires a lot of courage and resolution for that individual to take up a decision that involves risks. The prompt suggests that people should undertake risks only after they have carefully deliberated over the issue and its related consequences. In my opinion, I partially agree with the author's claim due to the below-mentioned reasons.
Firstly, there exist different scenarios in the political, economical, and legal spectrums where, taking risky decisions without careful consideration can lead to several undesirable consequences. For instance, in many legal proceedings, the court encounters several cases of juvenile crimes. Many times the court decides to take several risky decisions such as vindicating the criminal and not reprimanding him due to his age. In such scenarios, taking risky decisions without deliberating over the seriousness of the issue can lead to several undesirable consequences along with an unfair judgment. Also, consider the case when any government decides to bring out new laws in the society that can greatly impact the lives of the general populace. For instance, the Indian government had recently passed a new law of demonetization. This new reform can greatly impact the economy of the nation as well as the financial conditions of the people Thus the authorities need to consider the consequences of implementing the law by taking into consideration, the opinions of the people about the new reforms. If they fail to predict the consequences of their action, then it can lead to several catastrophic results affecting the entire nation. Therefore, for any legal or political matter it is better to take risky decisions only after considering all its possible ramifications.
However, in contrast to the above statement, in several professions such as business or science, it is often suggested that taking risks can only lead to advancement in those fields. For instance, several young people take the risk of devoting a large amount of money to a startup plan. In this case, it is not possible for the youngsters to predict the consequences of their decision as they do not have much experience in that particular field. But, they need to have trust in their inner conscience and take up such risks as it is necessary for them to enter into the business world and hence to achieve their dreams.
To sum up, taking up several risks, according to me, depends on the type of profession and the situation. If the situation is serious where a lot of people are dependent upon your decision, then undertaking any risk without properly considering the consequences can be dangerous. But sometimes, when one cannot possibly predict the consequences of his actions, then it would be prudent for him to believe in himself and take up risky decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion:
...that particular field. But, they need to have trust on their inner conscience and...
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Suggestion:
...have trust on their inner conscience and take up such risks as, it is necessary ...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2291.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21867881549 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97012587734 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503416856492 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0589645638 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.578947368 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1052631579 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288377392118 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881354836701 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974639396903 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180183852949 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767222518268 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.