Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
Nowadays, it is inevitable that foreign films are popular than local films. With globalization, the entertainment from other countries has replaced our local films significantly. This issue has become a considered one that needs to be discussed about the causes of this trend and how to encourage local movies.
To begin with, there are many reasons for this trend. Firstly, people always want to know how people from other countries live. As the interest and curiosity of people, they want to understand other cultures and prefer to watch international movies rather than regional movies. Secondly, in some developing countries, film producers still have much less experience and techniques ,unlike international makers. A variety of animations, story plots or advanced equipment can be created with better quality in foreign movies than a local one.
Lastly, most multiplexes are more likely to have a lot of time schedule for foreign movies.The convenience of the book a ticket for watching international films can lead to an increasing audience significantly. As a result, local films should be encouraged by the government.
There are many measures that can be taken for protecting regional films. Firstly, reducing tax on regional films, so movie makers will be able to get higher profit and audience can watch them at a lower price. If local films offer a cheaper ticket price, the number of audiences will increase rapidly. Secondly, some promoted regulations should be released from the government. Enforcing all local movies in timing schedule during the weekend is an effective way to increase the number of audiences. Most film viewers like to go to the cinema on the weekend, as this regulation, many people will be more interested in local movies.
To sum up, as the interest of other cultures and ignoring local films by native people, all local films can be replaced by international films in one day. If the government takes crucial steps to protect our film industry, it will boost the local entertainment industry and encourage native people to consume their regional movies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2100591716 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84056488488 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520710059172 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4102107644 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43791074824 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145999826115 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921926614799 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26846876219 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435662824461 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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