Many people today are choosing to live and work in another country after graduating from university in their home country. Why is this? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Owing to better employment opportunities and balanced work-life cycle, the tertiary education holders are opting to sustain their life and pursue jobs in nations other than their own. This trend has more merits as compared to the demerits, which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
There are a myriad of reasons why the individuals are migrating to other provinces. The principle one is availability of sectors which employ people. To be precise you, there are many opportunities present in developed countries which attract the youth towards it. Better wages act as a vital medium to make the people shift to other nations. In addition to this work-life cycle also have an impact on getting moved to another country. The preference of the working hours might vary among individuals which lead them to immigrate.
The trend has many advantages, out of which Multilingual is the prominent one. By changing country, the folks encounter a plethora of people speaking different languages which initially seems awkward to them but timely the inculcate multilingual skills. Furthermore, it assists to share one's culture and tradition. Numerous people follow their country's custom even while staying in other nation. This not only boosts the dignity of the tradition but also leads to its expansion as the inhabitants get attracted towards it and begin following it.
The major drawback of the notion is becoming a victim of 'Brain Drain' wherein the university graduates serve other countries instead of their personal one. This deters the literacy rate and further weakens the solidity of the respective province. Moreover, it also has an adverse impact on the economy and development of the regime.
To conclude, although there are many disadvantages of the notion of leaving one's country after graduation, there are significantly more advantages of the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3277027027 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79891053821 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4761643737 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7647058824 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251542186245 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066807749936 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523362036241 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137124233039 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268362869724 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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