Many people today are choosing to live and work in another country after graduating from university in their home country.
why is this ?
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In this contemporary era, most number of people prefer to go abroad from their host country after completing bachelors from institutes because of high living standard and better workplace. Further on, in this essay i will enlist reasons for this trend and also going to state whether advantages outweigh disadvantages or not.
To begin with, nowadays, majority of the society want to go abroad not only because of better living standard but also due to high salary attractions. First of all, in their host country, after completing higher studies they dont get high paid jobs so indeed there are less chances of survival in near future. However, bandwidth will get broad once a person goes foreign country as they will get jobs which paid more then their host country. For instance, in India majority of outsourcing work is done due to low labour cost. Second of all, to explore life one prefer to go, which give them a decent surrounding which ultimately affects mind and as an outcome they will achieve their goals like bread and butter.
There are numerous pros and cons associated while going abroad for further studies. Firstly, while going abroad one can learn their culture and as a result remove the stretched line called as language barrier. However, by eradicating language barrier one can have brief transfer of all culture, ultimately resulting in a mixed personality. To illustrate, a person dont know English in their host country but while going abroad they know much better because of communication. Secondly, the drawback is for their host country as their workforce will get affected and ultimately result in the country's Gross domestic product. For example, as per recent survey of India, one of the reason for GDP rate to decline is the trend for going abroad.
To conclude, due to less survival ratio and for exploring life, a majority of society prefer to go abroad to live and work. However, as per my view disadvantages outweigh advantage as indirectly it affects the growth of their host country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99115044248 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55115005773 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533923303835 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.149728415 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.8 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183464984435 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681758113423 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666587737232 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142357852903 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767765996419 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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