You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I would like to participate in Advance Architectural Design Seminar which is going to be held in Canada. I read about the seminar in an advertisement and would like to know a few more details.
I am eager to attend this seminar as I have also read that this seminar is going to welcome various speakers from around the world. This will surely help me to boost my career.
As per the advertisement, the date given is 12th October. Could please tell me the duration period of the seminar as it would help me to plan my schedule for booking the tickets. I would like to know in detail about the itinerary of the seminar as it would help me to prepare priorly for any interactive sessions. I have never travelled to Canada before, I would like you to even suggest to be a place of accommodation and how much will it cost for the duration. This will help me to budget my expenses. Please let me know the cost of the event and what all things would be included.
Waiting to hear from you at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Andrew
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-06-20 | asmita acharya | 89 | view |
| 2023-02-16 | msafaie | 84 | view |
| 2023-02-16 | msafaie | 89 | view |
| 2022-07-29 | vu_hieu2k5 | 61 | view |
| 2022-01-23 | shadow1222 | 61 | view |
- Are famous people treated unfairly by the media Should they be given more privacy or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- Recently abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- You have a full time job and you are also doing a part time evening course You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your teachers In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action 73
- Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education Or is it the responsi 73
- You would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates program accommodation and cost 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...would like to know a few more details. I am eager to attend this seminar as I ha...
^
Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest being'.
Suggestion: suggest being
...Canada before, I would like you to even suggest to be a place of accommodation and how much w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53059281592 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6259142452 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27313639353 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091403962336 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077659247862 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150573749706 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939149611348 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.