Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today's 21st century, celebrities have always been watched with the help of the media. They often face interference in their personal lives from the media. I feel everyone has a private life and should not be invaded by the public and media unless entitled. In this essay, I will further discuss both my views and give my opinion.
To begin with, celebrities have always been under the surveillance of the news and media. The work of these people is to scrutinize the personal lives of these celebrities and bring it out to the public for hot gossip. Though certain things help to influence the community, it is not right that one is being watched every second of their lives. In fact, these celebrities are being judged for their imperfections. To illustrate, Priyanka Chopra Jonas married someone who is 11 years younger than her. This became a piece of breaking news all around the world.
On the contrary, some celebrities use the media to stay in the news all the time. This helps them to boost their career and fame when seen in any controversies. In order to achieve this fame, a lot of celebrities do not realize the mental issues they go through. In addition to this, they undergo severe depression, PTSD, chronic mental illness, etc. which in turn affects their health in a very negative way. The general public idealizes these celebrities for their poise and grace every time they face media. But they do not realize what one celebrity is going through. For instance, Deepika Padukone had been through a severe depression phase because the media showed her imperfections to the public. Media hauled to pull her down from the industry.
In a word, I would say that everyone has a right to privacy, famous or not famous. A line must be drawn between public and private life by the people and the media. The media do not have a free right to publish everything about one's life which can ruin their career if not published correctly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, for example, i feel, in addition, in fact, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73976608187 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46465559561 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546783625731 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.670648212 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.6818181818 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2669788242 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769809918168 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531871788514 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17424213894 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442971398448 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.