In some societies it is increasingly common to try to achieve good health and fitness through physically demanding sports, special diets, or preventative medicine -conventional or alternative. Some people, however, believe that the best way to stay fit and healthy is simply to lead a normal life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In some societies, a huge number of people start playing physical sports or having special diets to maintain good health, while a part of other people believe that living a normal life can already make you be healthy. Personally, I fully agree with the first opinion.
Many people, to maintain good health, always train themselves with these physical activities, mental training, and strict diets. As I can see, it brings us plenty of benefits on both the physical and mental sides. Also, doing heavy activities is a way for people to release their stress and anger. Many mental activities, like meditation, make us control our emotions effectively. Some celebrities, like Djokovic in tennis, do these exercises and we can all see the effect it gives them. Furthermore, I see that having a good diet is a must for every people. Having a good meal, with healthy dishes, is a good experience and I believe it could be better if we enjoy it with our family and friends.
Additionally, I have to admit that I do not know about their expectation about normal life. From my point of view, I agree that living a normal life is not a bad thing, but it is a bit boring. All people of us, we all have a special ability in different aspects so live a life like that, for me, is a waste. Like other people, we all have to deal with many problems in our daily life, however, many people have mentioned activities to release and control their emotions. As a result, these emotions may affect their health and because of that, I do not see it as a really good point.
To sum up, we all have a choice to live. Because of that, I see that people should get themselves out of the barrier to living a happy and healthy life to express themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, while, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52866242038 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52281769296 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503184713376 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2303486103 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125807800659 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427744278915 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518113937773 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913267977845 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691585218875 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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