Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people argue that people should slive the gradually disappear species while others believe that humanity should be prioritized. In my opinion, the human should prevent the disappearance of animal to remain the balance of nature is more essential and governments and individuals should have a responsibility this problem.
On the one hand, in development countries, most of the citizen is also living in the difficult condition, disease and poor. As a matter of fact, covid 19 pandemics died some milion all over the world in the covid 19 pandemics. For instance, Indian's pandemic death toll is estimated at about 4 million. The reason was new variants and the country's heathy system to overload. In addition education of those countries need to improve a quality basic education gives children and youth the knowledge and it is a key diver for fostering economic growth.
On the other hand, the living species issue in the world needs to be concerned immediately. If some animal disappeared, other animals would not have food to maintain the life of them. This problem influences the serious food chain of humans because all kinds of animals have different roles in the biological chain and the type of animal extinct lead to the other animal extinct, until stopping at humans. To solve this problem needs to the cooperation of the government and each of us.
In conclusion, although both views have certainly some validity, humans are concerned with animal conservation to maintain the balanced ecosystem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... countrys heathy system to overload. In addition education of those countries need to im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77061546459 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4185705535 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319715877906 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933758475918 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713045813475 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166254209546 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848823344628 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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