The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a journal on environmental issues.
Over the past two years, the Mantle Magnesium Miners (MMM) has purchased over 20,000 square miles of land in the tropical nation of East Genovia. Mining magnesium on this land will definitely result in pollution and, since East Genovia is home to several endangered animal species, also in environmental disaster. But such disasters can be prevented if buyers simply refuse to purchase products that are made with MMM's magnesium unless the company abandons its mining plans for East Genovia.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The Following appeared in a letter to the editor of a jornal on environmental issues. Author made conclusion that, Mantle Magnesium Minters(MMM) which located in nation of East Genovia face several endagered animal species and envirnmental disaster, and this distaster can be prevented only if buyer refuse to purchase product made by MMM's magnesium unless company abondons to mining pans for East genova. There are several stated and unstated assumption made by author which need evidence for supprting claim. Before argument came hold in actual let us look in to given arguments.
Firstly, author made point that Over the past two years, the Mantle Magnesium Miners (MMM) has purchased over 20,000 square miles of land in the tropical nation of East Genovia. Authors did not mention where it is located in East Geneovia, only provided that mining land in an tropical nation of East Genovia. Author unable to mention an Total area of land in which 20,000 square miles of land purchased by Mantle Magnesium Miners (MMM).
Secondly, Author mention that Mining magnesium on this land will definately result in pollution, and since East Genovia is home to several endangered animal species, also envirnomental disaster. Author made strong assumption that, mining will definately affect towards animal species, and envirnmental disaster. We don't no about exact location Mantle Magnesium Miners (MMM). How far it from East Genovia, Whether it really affect on animal and Environment. Author strong assumption that Mining will definately affect animal species and envirnment. It might possiblity, that weather change in East Genovia affect on animal species and environment. we just dont no what are weather situation, how it affect on animal species and environment.
Thirdly, Author state that disasters can be prevented if buyers simply refuse to purchase prodcut that are made with MMM's magnesium so that company abandons its mining plans for East Genevia. Author had made srtong assumption that for abandon mining plan from East Genovia, buyers has refuse product which made by MMM magnesium. Author need to find that if refusing product it might be tends an MMM magnesium company to change there plan. Author need to find out quality of mining product which are made by MMM magnesium it might possiblity this product are of antique piece more costlier than regular. so it may revenew more towards East Genovia, which might have more profit from this comapny. we don't no about what kind of product they made, how much it cost? Comapny pays some taxes towards East Genovia, which is to be profitable in accordance towards nation.
To sum up with all, author need to survey all the point before making any conclusion. The Arguments become weak arguments because author made stated and unstated assumption which need further need evidences or study.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 443, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
.... There are several stated and unstated assumption made by author which need evidence for ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 510, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hich need evidence for supprting claim. Before argument came hold in actual let us loo...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ovia, only provided that mining land in an tropical nation of East Genovia. Author...
^^
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... East Genovia. Author unable to mention an Total area of land in which 20,000 squa...
^^
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... species, and envirnmental disaster. We dont no about exact location Mantle Magnesiu...
^^^^
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ies, and envirnmental disaster. We dont no about exact location Mantle Magnesium M...
^^
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...it from East Genovia, Whether it really affect on animal and Environment. Author strong a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 604, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ty, that weather change in East Genovia affect on animal species and environment. we just...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 646, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...fect on animal species and environment. we just dont no what are weather situation...
^^
Line 5, column 654, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...animal species and environment. we just dont no what are weather situation, how it a...
^^^^
Line 5, column 659, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...l species and environment. we just dont no what are weather situation, how it affe...
^^
Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...t no what are weather situation, how it affect on animal species and environment. T...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...t no what are weather situation, how it affect on animal species and environment. Thir...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 440, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...magnesium company to change there plan. Author need to find out quality of mining prod...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 576, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'costlier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: costlier
...blity this product are of antique piece more costlier than regular. so it may revenew more to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 604, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...tique piece more costlier than regular. so it may revenew more towards East Genovi...
^^
Line 7, column 697, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ght have more profit from this comapny. we dont no about what kind of product they...
^^
Line 7, column 700, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... have more profit from this comapny. we dont no about what kind of product they made...
^^^^
Line 7, column 705, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... more profit from this comapny. we dont no about what kind of product they made, h...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 13.6137724551 154% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2391.0 2260.96107784 106% => OK
No of words: 459.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2091503268 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4909669684 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440087145969 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 736.2 705.55239521 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.670581195 57.8364921388 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.956521739 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9565217391 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39130434783 5.70786347227 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333108342006 0.218282227539 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111532284907 0.0743258471296 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126559676393 0.0701772020484 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19973012181 0.128457276422 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167691617349 0.0628817314937 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 98.500998004 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 443, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
.... There are several stated and unstated assumption made by author which need evidence for ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 510, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hich need evidence for supprting claim. Before argument came hold in actual let us loo...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ovia, only provided that mining land in an tropical nation of East Genovia. Author...
^^
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... East Genovia. Author unable to mention an Total area of land in which 20,000 squa...
^^
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... species, and envirnmental disaster. We dont no about exact location Mantle Magnesiu...
^^^^
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ies, and envirnmental disaster. We dont no about exact location Mantle Magnesium M...
^^
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...it from East Genovia, Whether it really affect on animal and Environment. Author strong a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 604, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ty, that weather change in East Genovia affect on animal species and environment. we just...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 646, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...fect on animal species and environment. we just dont no what are weather situation...
^^
Line 5, column 654, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...animal species and environment. we just dont no what are weather situation, how it a...
^^^^
Line 5, column 659, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...l species and environment. we just dont no what are weather situation, how it affe...
^^
Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...t no what are weather situation, how it affect on animal species and environment. T...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...t no what are weather situation, how it affect on animal species and environment. Thir...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 440, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...magnesium company to change there plan. Author need to find out quality of mining prod...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 576, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'costlier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: costlier
...blity this product are of antique piece more costlier than regular. so it may revenew more to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 604, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...tique piece more costlier than regular. so it may revenew more towards East Genovi...
^^
Line 7, column 697, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ght have more profit from this comapny. we dont no about what kind of product they...
^^
Line 7, column 700, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... have more profit from this comapny. we dont no about what kind of product they made...
^^^^
Line 7, column 705, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... more profit from this comapny. we dont no about what kind of product they made, h...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 13.6137724551 154% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2391.0 2260.96107784 106% => OK
No of words: 459.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2091503268 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4909669684 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440087145969 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 736.2 705.55239521 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.670581195 57.8364921388 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.956521739 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9565217391 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39130434783 5.70786347227 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333108342006 0.218282227539 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111532284907 0.0743258471296 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126559676393 0.0701772020484 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19973012181 0.128457276422 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167691617349 0.0628817314937 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 98.500998004 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.