The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of online retail sales in the areas like travel, music, books, and clothes, which are made in New Zealand. The data was collected in the years 2003 and 2013.
Overall, The film/music and books have experienced increased trend while the proportion of people wandering place to place and buying clothes have declined over the period.
In 2003, the travel sector was the dominating area contributing more than one-third portion of the sales i. e. 36% of the total sales; meanwhile, the percentage of people purchasing the books was the least with the exact figure of only 19%.
In 2013, the former leading sector has reduced in its rank, securing second place with 29%. Similarly, the trend of people purchasing garments has also resulted in a decline of almost 8 percent, reaching the value of 16% in 2013. However, the movies and reading material sectors have risen moderately inclining up to 33% and 22% respectively while both of them were almost similar in 2003.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: There should be no space here: 'i.e.'.
Suggestion: i.e.
...ore than one-third portion of the sales i. e. 36% of the total sales; meanwhile, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, second, similarly, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00591715976 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51655350831 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639053254438 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2592270451 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149672975963 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654079775832 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564012150991 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910455904162 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791143536755 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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