You borrowed something from your friend, later it got damaged. Write letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should :
apologize for it
tell how it got damaged
say how you are going to fix the issue.
Dear Jini,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you well. I’ve finally managed to put pen to paper to say why I had not been able to return the electric guitar I borrowed from you last week. Actually, I accidentally damaged it and I am really guilty for that.
Yesterday, by mistake one of the strings of the guitar got twisted while I was practicing for my rehearsals. Initially I tried to fix it on my own, and in the process of doing so the bolts of the guitar opened and all the strings came out. Although I had repaired my guitar many times, this one was of a different model so I couldn't handle it properly. I’m again so sorry that this happened.
I’ve gathered all the pieces and kept them safe to be sent for repair to the best musical instruments’ shop in the city. They’ve already started with the repair work and will return the guitar by the end of this week. I'll personally bring it to you as soon as I receive it.
I'd like to apologize to you again and hope that you'll forgive me.
Yours lovingly
Ishween kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jini, How are you? Hope this letter finds you ...
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Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... this one was of a different model so I couldnt handle it properly. I’m again so sorry ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 219, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...urn the guitar by the end of this week. Ill personally bring it to you as soon as I...
^^^
Line 8, column 2, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...it to you as soon as I receive it. Id like to apologize to you again and hope...
^^
Line 8, column 50, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...to apologize to you again and hope that youll forgive me. Yours lovingly Ishween...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, if, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37948717949 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35888517111 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2987344904 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6923076923 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210836471979 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762270141202 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662920914641 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11403724108 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933308152008 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.