Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
Nowadays, individuals should tend to damage their environment, which will have a huge impact on their life in the future. This essay will discuss the current environmental problems and what governments and individuals should do to alleviate the issues .
There are two of numerous problems which people act to threaten the environment. First of all, most people use private vehicles to move to another place because they feel relaxed and comfortable when they just utilize it to serve their demands. Besides that, they also use plastic bags for any cases. This means individuals are not aware that they need to reduce the quantity of plastic bags in their house to protect their environment. Taking Vietnam for example, according to the University of Vietnam Technology, more than 75% of citizens do not bring their own bags to go to market, instead, they will use plastic bags in supermarkets for more convenience.
On the one hand, governments should introduce new laws to limit emissions from personal vehicles. Taking public transport is highly recommended instead of driving. For example, during Covid-19 pandemic, the amount of emissions that are released to the environment reduced significantly, from 53% of pollution in the air to about 35%. In addition, the governments should widely promote recycling as much as possible.
On the other hand, people should choose products with less packaging and bring their own bags to go to market for more environmental reasons. They need to be aware that they are the main factor which cause the current state of the environment. Additionally, they can enhance and apply more knowledge and catch up on the news about how the environment changed during the past 10 years.
Overall, there are many environmental factors related to individuals, but this does not mean that only citizens need to tackle and handle that, it also involves the governments in every country around the world. I suppose that both governments and citizens need to alter for the more positive signals about the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, for example, i suppose, in addition, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19578313253 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79462305618 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7667082442 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143374216938 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495331099648 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568491452143 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082485126708 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06100870699 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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