Global warming is one of the biggest threats human face in the 21th century and sea level are rising at an alarming rate . What problems are associated with this and what are the possible solutions.
In cutting-edge Era, sea level are rising day by day at an alarming rate due to global warming that became hot potato issue which mankind face . In addition to it human faces several problems. it can be tackled by taking some suitable steps . I will discuss mence that are associated behind this along with solutions in upcoming fragments.
To commence with , there are various problems behind the inclination of sea level quickly. Firstly, residential area become less . To elaborate it , the increasing level of sea become very big issue for area near sea because whenever the sea level become high this areas are covered by water which destroyed the area near sea due to this the area for living decreasing. Secondly, natural clarity become high . To explicate it, in raining day this will cause huge problem. because due to rain the sea level become extremely high which further increase the chance of flood. if flood occurs then water will enter in individuals house which create big problem . moreover, because of flood water which remains near or in houses will cause diseases.
However, the coin is always two sides. if there is problem then it can be measures by taking suitable steps . First is construction of dams in every city or near the city. which will control the chances of flood ìn that area . moreover, the stored water can be used for many other purposes. Second solution is that individuals can planted more and more trees because trees can store water in roots which will help in case of flood and reduce the water level in that area. Furthermore, tree's also helps to maintain the environment which further reduce the affect of global warming in addition to it sea level will automatically balance.
In nutshell, it can be reiterated that the increasing sea level and problem behind it can be solved by maintain balance in every area by constructing dam and with the help of plants and trees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8623853211 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46223603509 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483180428135 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.7839726914 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196580619436 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588876186065 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670399793447 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141801711453 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914576742637 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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