A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Over the recent decades of time. The education system is changing and improving day by day. The prompt highlights the issue that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. I mostly disagree with the prompt for the following two reasons and I do concede that there might be various different scenarios.
First of all, In a nation, there are different types of personalities found in students based on their childhood and genetics. So, Some might be good at a particular subject while others might be good at some another subject. I strongly believe that high school subjects should of, what should is interested to make his future career. For example, if a school student is interested in programming and coding, he/she should allow selecting subjects accordingly, as there are many coding competitions going on coding platforms like code-forces, CodeChef which organize coding competitions for school and high school students.
Secondly, In the 20th century, the World is changing drastically with technological advancements, Hence the job market is also changing. Therefore, It is very important that the high school student should study and explore different career opportunities at it very beginning of the career. for example, some school student might found interest in a subject and start developing skills in it, which will give them a powerful start to his/her career.
Finally, To conclude, I mostly disagree with the prompt's message that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college, However, there might be some debatable points that will support this prompt idea. For example, School and high-school students don't have enough maturity to select and pursue careers in a positive way, So it might be a debatable topic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... school subjects should of, what should is interested to make his future career. F...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ies at it very beginning of the career. for example, some school student might foun...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'prompts'' or 'prompt's'?
Suggestion: prompts'; prompt's
...To conclude, I mostly disagree with the prompts message that a nation should require al...
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Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...xample, School and high-school students dont have enough maturity to select and purs...
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Line 7, column 361, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...h maturity to select and pursue careers in a positive way, So it might be a debatable topic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24414715719 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74035728668 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535117056856 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8932736467 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 5.21951772744 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326831191693 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130549326982 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.221891823438 0.0758088955206 293% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239428097896 0.150359130593 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147467232962 0.0667264976115 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.