Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today's era, is the era of digital age. However, a number of people think their life to be more difficult with the advancement in technology, and they want digital detox holidays to led a simple life. I strongly disagree to a large extent with this notion. A large number of arguments surround my opinion.
First of all, technology has made the life much more easier with the making of various breakthroughs. In other words, invention of new machines, let people to put off their burden of work and do it effortlessly. For instance, previously human had to carry heavy loads on their heads which was a very daunting task, but now there are huge machineries to do all this stuff.
Moreover, with the advent of modern cutting edge technology, the living has become much faster. Although, today the amount of work has been escalated, however, with user-friendly gadgets and innovative digitalization, the work load has been reduced to a far extent. For example, in old times bank had to calculate the interest amount on loan manually. Whereas, now the computing machines do that work within the fractions of time. Even if, we have to send someone any message, learn something new or gather some information. Then, we just need internet for this.
To sum up, it can be reiterated that, even though, few people have opposing thoughts about the modern technology rather than understanding it's real value and assistance, the technology has actually made the life much convenient in practical world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...ree to a large extent with this notion. A large number of arguments surround my opinion. First...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... all, technology has made the life much more easier with the making of various breakthrough...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97609561753 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77202096896 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653386454183 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.6112942442 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144144268753 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418608416178 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446867685252 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849813377413 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303821020976 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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