It is believed that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school student. Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
International student exchange program are being promoted at global level due to the era of globalisation, in which differences even between the rival countries are shrinking substantially. Although, this development has certain positives and negatives associated with, i am convinced that the advantages entirely outclass the disadvantages.
Admittedly, the biggest concern pertaining to this global trend is expenditure that can be unaffordable for parents, who belong to underprivileged section of society. In other words, sending children to access unknown territories can be extremely expensive for the people with low budgets. Another major hurdle that can be felt in the form of cultural shock, which might be intolerable for the younger people due to dearth of experience in tackling culture related differences.
Despite this, a plethora of merits relating to this global phenomena must be taken into account. The most compelling one is, face to face counselling can be done with the experienced and professional natives of the country where the tourist plan. With this, adolescent can easily explore the prospective future disciplines, which are having a vast scope globally. Another tangible pro is, younger people get an opportunity for cultural exchange, by which the learnt how to adapt themselves according to an alien culture by shrinking their biased views about others. This directly widen their mental horizon, and they turn out to be far better individual than before. Finally, they learnt how to take decisions independently, which in turn enhances their confidence level, that is vital for their future success.
To conclude, a few cons are related to international student exchange program are undeniable, even so these are just negligible, if compared with the myriad of merits mentioned above. The fact of the matter is, this approach is no less than a blessing for the young generation belonging to the developing nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ositives and negatives associated with, i am convinced that the advantages entire...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, even so, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48013245033 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02988817593 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.614416462 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.307692308 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134123117734 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480237785034 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381069886405 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935066967264 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312312438142 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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